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Siren's Song 2

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MissSilverFyre
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Here's my second attempt. I took what was said and used that to fix the issues in the overall pic. :) I must thank everyone again for taking the time to critique my picture. It was/is most appreciated and can only make me stronger and better at what I do.

Stocks once again are:

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I see you have already been given critiques on the previous one, so I will base it on this current one from %Photomanip101's poll:

One slight thing that looks off are the rocks on the sides. Since it's a night scene and a bluish tone to it, the colour and tonal balance on the cliffs don't match the overall image and/or the mermaid. The green glowing smoke would also cast some green light on the body and the skin/scales of the mermaid along with her hair.