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Here's my second attempt. I took what was said and used that to fix the issues in the overall pic. :) I must thank everyone again for taking the time to critique my picture. It was/is most appreciated and can only make me stronger and better at what I do.

Stocks once again are:

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I see you have already been given critiques on the previous one, so I will base it on this current one from %Photomanip101's poll:

One slight thing that looks off are the rocks on the sides. Since it's a night scene and a bluish tone to it, the colour and tonal balance on the cliffs don't match the overall image and/or the mermaid. The green glowing smoke would also cast some green light on the body and the skin/scales of the mermaid along with her hair.
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msfowle Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:wow: This is gorgeous! Very well done! :love:
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MissSilverFyre Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :D <3
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:iconduzetdaram:
Lovely.  Actually, it looks amazing. Color balance is properly to the scene.  Congratulations for the work and for the learning spirit and open mind to constructive critics.
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MissSilverFyre Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D I couldn't have done it without the lovely feedback. And of course I'd take it well. Anyone would be silly not to. I need it to help me learn, without it I'd make the same mistakes.
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Aeirmid Nov 11, 2013   Digital Artist
So much better! Nice work!! :hug:
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MissSilverFyre Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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KingaBritschgi Nov 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
Looks very nice, Shayna! LMK if you need more help.
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MissSilverFyre Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :) I will totally stalk you in case I need help. :P I am sure I will need it.
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KingaBritschgi Nov 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
:heart:
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